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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #20 on: March 08, 2017, 01:26:41 am
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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #21 on: March 08, 2017, 12:01:17 pm
Goblin:

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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #22 on: March 08, 2017, 11:09:53 pm
Doesn't really read goblin to me, try a bit more skin showing or perhaps some ganglier limbs?
They also tend to have big noses and ears, which might help
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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #23 on: March 09, 2017, 09:37:17 pm
I was using this as a reference:


It looks ok to me.

What doesn't look ok is the orc:


I don't like pretty much anything about it.

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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #24 on: March 09, 2017, 09:50:30 pm
I'd say definitely redraw the orc, the pose is way too unbalanced.

Back on the goblin though, my problem is it comes off as more of a knight thanks to the head bit looking like one of those visored helmets more than a goblin face. On top of that, it took me until just now to even recognize they weren't wearing armor! I think maybe saturating the green some more and reducing how shiny those pectorals are might help to abate that!
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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #25 on: March 09, 2017, 11:56:51 pm
Second take on the orc, not quite there yet but I think it's better:

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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #26 on: March 10, 2017, 12:38:30 am
Looking much better, yeah! Center of balance still looks off though, maybe extend that back-leg out some instead of bending it like he's doing a side lunge?
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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #27 on: March 10, 2017, 08:57:58 am
like those miniatures you made, they look great!

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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #28 on: March 10, 2017, 12:14:47 pm
Thanks Sersch,

I did another take on the orc. I'd say I'm pretty happy with it now.


The only thing I'd say I don't like much is the torso on the right side (his left side) next to the abs. I'm not too sure what I'm supposed to "put" there.

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Re: Fantasy Miniatures

Reply #29 on: March 11, 2017, 12:44:31 pm
Any comments on the character sheet design? Readability?