AuthorTopic: Explosion needs help!  (Read 584 times)

Offline DieMango

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Explosion needs help!

on: February 09, 2017, 06:05:27 pm
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imgur.com/a/R6b2V

Just started tp practice Animating (with the help of these cool tutorials :https://www.patreon.com/saint11/posts?tag=tutorial)

But i am really not too happy abou what i have right now...or with other words:,
, i have no clue of how a good explosion shoud look like''

Edit: New Animation...how is this one?


Maybe ths is great...but i doubt it...something seems off with the Yellow-explosion...to big spikes? Or did i fuck up the smoke?...really not sure...

« Last Edit: February 10, 2017, 06:08:33 pm by DieMango »

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Re: Explosion needs help!

Reply #1 on: February 12, 2017, 04:24:44 pm
It already looks quite good, i think it could look better if you see some more yellow/red flames, right now the duration for that part is rather short.

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Re: Explosion needs help!

Reply #2 on: February 13, 2017, 10:37:56 am
It already looks quite good, i think it could look better if you see some more yellow/red flames, right now the duration for that part is rather short.
But the flames go out the isntant smokes appears...i try to make the flame-frames longer.

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Re: Explosion needs Critic (repost from the normal forum)

Reply #3 on: February 14, 2017, 08:27:38 pm
Try tweaking it so the spikes come out from the "seams" between the smoke puffs?
PSA: use imgur
http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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