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Offline ElChuchis

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Help to polish this cockatrice

on: January 06, 2017, 01:01:46 pm
I am making a Cockatrice, but i am not happy with it... Need some help to polish the shadows and the wings! Thanks you all!  :)


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« Last Edit: January 06, 2017, 01:10:32 pm by ElChuchis »

Offline RunninBlood

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Re: Help to polish this cockatrice

Reply #1 on: January 06, 2017, 01:13:00 pm
Hey man,
First of all, looks good, i can tell it's a cockatrice.
What I would do first is tone down a bit with the AA and use way less colors, at the moment it looks pretty blurry.
Regarding the wings, you could make them go up a bit higher and maybe let the front wing go more over the body.

Hope this helps!

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Re: Help to polish this cockatrice

Reply #2 on: January 06, 2017, 01:35:16 pm
Hey man,
First of all, looks good, i can tell it's a cockatrice.
What I would do first is tone down a bit with the AA and use way less colors, at the moment it looks pretty blurry.
Regarding the wings, you could make them go up a bit higher and maybe let the front wing go more over the body.

Hope this helps!

Thanks you! I will learn some AA tips, I never used it before and I search on internet and it seems good! Ty! I will update the pic when I get the result!

About the wings, in my opinion are chicken wings and I think chicken wings are close of the body!

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Re: Help to polish this cockatrice

Reply #3 on: January 06, 2017, 02:16:02 pm
I tried to add some AA, not sure if is well aplicated  ???


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« Last Edit: January 06, 2017, 04:03:38 pm by ElChuchis »

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Re: Help to polish this cockatrice

Reply #4 on: January 09, 2017, 09:33:23 pm
FINISHED!

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Re: Help to polish this cockatrice

Reply #5 on: January 09, 2017, 09:39:15 pm
It is not bad but it looks very flat, maybe you should change the shading so that it would help define the shapes and give volume, particularly in the wings.