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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #10 on: April 30, 2017, 09:41:06 pm
My twitter i post all my pixel art https://twitter.com/yoshift1

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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #11 on: April 30, 2017, 09:43:40 pm
VERY minimalist still. i'm digging the small details though, there's plenty of story to that picture.
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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #12 on: May 01, 2017, 01:39:23 am
That looks super cool. It looks more like concept art than pixel art though. Pixel art tends to have a lot more texturing. Here's an example of Kirokaze's work:



(By Kirokaze on Deviantart)

It's a fairly simple scene, but there is a lot of detail in his shading.


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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #13 on: May 08, 2017, 11:39:12 pm
My twitter i post all my pixel art https://twitter.com/yoshift1

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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #14 on: May 09, 2017, 12:02:06 am
I tried a new style of pixel art
http://yoshift.deviantart.com/art/Wanderer-679551650?ga_submit_new=10%3A1494286664

That's pretty nice, but I reccomend you continue embedding images. Putting a clickthrough like that isn't exactly ideal for ease of use!
As for crits, I'd say it kinda works but there's a lot of empty/wasted space and weird inconsistency on this picture. for example, why's the stop sign there without a proper road? Why'd you miss an opportunity to plonk in a proper wasteland-y ruined highway on top of that muddy path, replete with cracks and divots and worn paint? And why is there no continuation of that path over the hills leading towards the city?

Internal consistency is very important! While deliberately ignoring it can be a great way to imbue a work with a kind of ethereal mystic vibe, you mostly want to avoid it or risk confusing the person looking at the piece!
PSA: use imgur
http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #15 on: May 09, 2017, 02:36:14 am
I tried a new style of pixel art
http://yoshift.deviantart.com/art/Wanderer-679551650?ga_submit_new=10%3A1494286664

That's pretty nice, but I reccomend you continue embedding images. Putting a clickthrough like that isn't exactly ideal for ease of use!
As for crits, I'd say it kinda works but there's a lot of empty/wasted space and weird inconsistency on this picture. for example, why's the stop sign there without a proper road? Why'd you miss an opportunity to plonk in a proper wasteland-y ruined highway on top of that muddy path, replete with cracks and divots and worn paint? And why is there no continuation of that path over the hills leading towards the city?

Internal consistency is very important! While deliberately ignoring it can be a great way to imbue a work with a kind of ethereal mystic vibe, you mostly want to avoid it or risk confusing the person looking at the piece!

Thanks you ! You really help me ;)
My twitter i post all my pixel art https://twitter.com/yoshift1

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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #16 on: May 10, 2017, 02:13:21 am
I did this today ^^
« Last Edit: May 10, 2017, 02:15:34 am by yoshift »
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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #17 on: May 10, 2017, 06:01:40 pm
Looks like you upscaled it weird. For example, the ropes on the balloon are 2px wide in some places, 1px in others. If you scale things in the middle of working, that'll require redoing the previous stuff to match the new scale, or it'll look all jagged like this most recent piece.

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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #18 on: May 10, 2017, 07:00:26 pm


I made more details. :)

this is amazing!

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Re: My first pixel art :)

Reply #19 on: May 18, 2017, 10:37:36 pm
Wow, for a beginner this is some truly inspiring stuff! Great job.