AuthorTopic: [WIP] [CC] I Would Love Some CC On This Sprite I'm Working On  (Read 1702 times)

Offline Senritsu

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I've been working on an isometric sprite. I started with south since it was the easiest. Could use some critique on this, please.

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Re: [WIP] [CC] I Would Love Some CC On This Sprite I'm Working On

Reply #1 on: August 30, 2016, 01:02:41 am
Great Base! I would reccommend some shading to add some depth.

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Re: [WIP] [CC] I Would Love Some CC On This Sprite I'm Working On

Reply #2 on: August 30, 2016, 01:06:57 am
Legs and arms are too short in comparison to the torso, looks like a dwarf. Shrink the torso some or elongate everything else.
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Re: [WIP] [CC] I Would Love Some CC On This Sprite I'm Working On

Reply #3 on: August 30, 2016, 01:17:16 am
I'm with SimeonTemplar and MysteryMeat. Great start, but the shading and skewed proportions should be pretty high on your objective list. I took a quick crack at adjusting them a little to give you a nice side-by-side comparison. Also, you'll notice that I marked the jaw line rather than letting it continue into the neck. This is because assuming you're going with the standard 3/4ths view, it would not be possible to see it as a continuous strip from this perspective. Thing 1 is the original, Thing 2 the revised.