There is a lot of low-contrast detail overall that's not really readable even at the already-zoomed view you posted. It'd look tidier removed, or you can raise the contrast so that the detail is more visible, depending on your goals with the details.
The animation is appealing on its own, but would be distracting in-game. Keys, rings, and hears can all be animated in the world instead, where noticing them is most important. In the HUD, the motion should be minimal, or even absent.
