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Idle Power Armor

on: August 13, 2016, 02:44:41 pm



Hey, I've spent some hours on this animation and would like to get some feedback.
Let me know what you think and how should I improve.
« Last Edit: August 13, 2016, 02:48:43 pm by zoekmath »

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Re: Idle Power Armor

Reply #1 on: August 14, 2016, 01:13:11 am
Why are his knees compressing like that?
His legs should move with a bob like that, not just the knees up. Study some idle animations from street fighter, they'll lead you on the right track.
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Re: Idle Power Armor

Reply #2 on: August 14, 2016, 08:58:52 pm
Thanks for the reply. I'll spend some more hours trying to fix it.
I'm pretty busy with job and stuff so I don't have time right now to edit it.

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Re: Idle Power Armor

Reply #3 on: August 16, 2016, 01:35:24 pm

I've made his leg move. Hope it looks better now.

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Re: Idle Power Armor

Reply #4 on: August 17, 2016, 06:43:42 pm
It's still strange.
Consider you doing the same idle stance.
Stand up and try to do the same movement, it's very strange '-'

I made a quick edit using photoshop tools and I think an Idle animation would be better like this:



Of course it's only an example to comparison, but it's somethingl like that.

Edit:

Look, I found an example of what I'm trying to show:

« Last Edit: August 17, 2016, 06:47:34 pm by Tori »