Chibi Request #2

[Capta1n_Henry]

What do you mean by tighten?

[MysteryMeat]

Shorten it slightly, from this perspective it would be slightly smaller due to perspective.
Just raise it a pixel, and line the crotch area over the leg so it looks "behind"

[Capta1n_Henry]

Like this?

[Capta1n_Henry]

So uh, should I start on clothes and stuff or should I work on the anatomy more?

[MysteryMeat]

So uh, should I start on clothes and stuff or should I work on the anatomy more?

For this piece I'd say just move on to the rest of it.
You really need to buckle down and study skeleton structure and basics after this though, you've got the work ethic to tweak what you have but that foundation needs to be rebuilt so you can get things better that first go.

[Capta1n_Henry]

Ok, I'm starting on the clothes now. I'm going to keep the outlines and flat colors for now just for easy readability. I also moved the legs closer together because it looked a bit weird to me. Am I doing alright so far?

[Capta1n_Henry]

Started working on the eyes and facial features. I'm really hesitant to work on the cloth because that's gonna take a long while. I'm sorry that these are coming out slow. I pretty much only have free time on Sundays.

[MysteryMeat]

Too close again! Remember, there's a space of one eyeball's width between the eyes.

[Capta1n_Henry]

Like this? Also I don't recall anyone telling me about eyeball spacing, but thanks for that little rule.

[MysteryMeat]

Yes, much better! And nobody did I think, I put remember in front of sentences like that sometimes and it's a bit of a bad habit. Whoops!
The only other thing to work on is making the eyes focus, right now they're kind of staring off into space, the right eye looks like it's looking off to the right and the left eye dead center. Move the pupil on the leftmost eye right to fix this, ideally eyes should face the same way.