AuthorTopic: Fireball throw sketch! Tell me if its wrong.  (Read 1783 times)

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Fireball throw sketch! Tell me if its wrong.

on: May 18, 2016, 05:57:40 am
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Re: Fireball throw sketch! Tell me if its wrong.

Reply #1 on: May 18, 2016, 07:36:02 am
There's a couple things that stick out to me, the first being that the kick seems to be there to give the character a grounded stance but then they start flying into the air.
The second nitpick is that the tossing animation itself needs to be maybe a frame shorter, it's a tad slow.
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