AuthorTopic: [CC] P.2 Gravity Falls : Mabel's dance.  (Read 6691 times)

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Re: [CC][WIP] 2016 Greeting card in progress 75%

Reply #10 on: January 30, 2016, 01:24:09 pm
I've tried to emphasize texture work, only 24h left to finish it, and i'm sick as hell...

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Re: [CC][WIP] 2016 Greeting card in progress P.2

Reply #11 on: January 31, 2016, 04:13:16 pm

Any C&C before I put an end to this image ?

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Re: [CC][WIP] 2016 Greeting card in progress P.2

Reply #12 on: January 31, 2016, 04:30:54 pm
Maybe a little bit more texture on the leaves on top of the trees, as they are pretty large blocks of solid colour right now, and you could maybe add more cloudy bubbles to the sky?
Both aren't necessary though. It looks great as is, and I've been liking the progress.
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Re: [CC][WIP] 2016 Greeting card in progress P.2

Reply #13 on: January 31, 2016, 05:18:49 pm
I disagree, I think it's done!

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Re: [CC][WIP] 2016 Greeting card in progress P.2

Reply #14 on: January 31, 2016, 05:36:11 pm
I think it's done as well. (Or at least the nearest you can get to "done", as there are always ways to make it better)
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Re: [CC][WIP] 2016 Greeting card in progress P.2

Reply #15 on: January 31, 2016, 05:38:05 pm
Ambivorous > I would like to keep the third plan not into focus, I feel it s better for composition sake.

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Re: [CC][WIP] 2016 Greeting card DONE !

Reply #16 on: February 29, 2016, 09:46:55 am
Hey !
It feels great to browse pixelation with such a sweet skin. kudos to the samourai !

here is a little animation in tribute of Gravity Falls, one of the coolest TV show of those past years.

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Re: [CC] P.2 Gravity Falls : Mabel's dance.

Reply #17 on: March 01, 2016, 01:06:37 am
Heheh lovely little animation. I haven't seen the show but does the head really work like that? Due to the way the eyes are glued on a cylinder I get a strong impression that her mouth/jaw/chin area is bowl shaped.

Anyway the dance and animation style is ace :y:

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Re: [CC] P.2 Gravity Falls : Mabel's dance.

Reply #18 on: March 03, 2016, 11:20:55 am
Thanks ! The head actually kinda work like that, I was mimicing the mickey's ear animation trick. But I've also altered the face design, so maybe my anim isn't as respectful to the original character design has it should, resulting in a bowl shaped chin (which is kinda cute ?).

thanks for the critic, always appreciated.