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Re: Pal hires works - what to do now?

Reply #10 on: May 27, 2016, 02:41:24 am
By the way, I just saw your process pic for the image. I think you had some really cool shapes for the buildings that got lost. They had a less flat design and a more emphasized volume, but they looked on point.

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Re: Pal hires works - what to do now?

Reply #11 on: May 27, 2016, 04:56:49 am
actually I like the flatness in the original car picture.

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Re: Pal hires works - what to do now?

Reply #12 on: June 01, 2016, 07:38:17 am
Worked littlebit with colours


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Re: Pal hires works - what to do now?

Reply #13 on: June 01, 2016, 06:26:50 pm
Some things that immediately come to mind on the airplane one:
-where are the missiles coming from? is it dodging them, or did it fire them?
-If the former, where's the indication that he's dodging?
-That background's kind of dull-looking, not a lot of visual interest, but I'm also assuming it's just a sketch layer for now while you clear up the plane.

Things I might have done if it were my work:
-Flip the background upside-down so it looks like the plane's mid-flip to create something neater to look at
-if it's supposed to be firing them, add some brackets under the wings and align the missiles and smoke better so they're coming from under the wings more clearly
-possibly add some kind of background fighting, like gun turrets, tanks, etc to get it looking bullet-hellish like air combat usually is
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http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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Re: Pal hires works - what to do now?

Reply #14 on: June 02, 2016, 06:49:25 am
Thanks! Good idea! Ill try to follow!  ;)