AuthorTopic: GR#231 - Reclining Nude - Anatomy  (Read 2673 times)

Offline Gizmonicgamer

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GR#231 - Reclining Nude - Anatomy

on: December 03, 2014, 08:17:40 am
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Started this earlier today. I feel like I'm kind of wandering a bit aimlessly in regards to the anatomy and shading on the legs and pelvic region, though;

any C+C would be much appreciated!
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Re: Reclining nude [wip]

Reply #1 on: December 03, 2014, 12:23:47 pm
Some sloppy thoughts on anatomy, proportion and lighting:

I wasn't sure how you intended to position the bent leg, so I tucked it underneath the other one. Not sure I like my colors, but hopefully this helps  :y:

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Re: Reclining nude [wip]

Reply #2 on: December 04, 2014, 08:40:57 pm
The body seems awfully detailed, you should only apply basic detail before deciding on all of the shapes / silhouette of the thing you're drawing. Nice detail, in any case :-X

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Re: Reclining nude [wip]

Reply #3 on: December 13, 2014, 04:48:40 am
Much appreciated! I've taken that into consideration and have decided to alter some portions of the body and the anatomy to better fit where I'm trying to go with it.



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The body seems awfully detailed, you should only apply basic detail before deciding on all of the shapes / silhouette of the thing you're drawing

its a bad habit, but i tend to do better/have more fun doing it. something i should break out of lol

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Re: Reclining nude [wip]

Reply #4 on: December 13, 2014, 05:13:32 am


Generally pretty good. but with the way the hips were turning, I think it would be good to show more of that change of direction. The navel is following a line that is out of sync with them. It's better to block out the whole pose first, of course. The knees are a bit large and unstudied ( more so the one on the left) and the arm is going out of its way to support the body, would be better as a straight line.

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Re: Reclining nude [wip]

Reply #5 on: December 13, 2014, 05:41:09 am
That's excellent advice, actually; thank you! I'm working on updating the piece as we speak.