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GR#230 - Devotion - Gameart

on: July 28, 2014, 12:59:25 pm
Devotion among the stars...

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Re: Devotion

Reply #1 on: July 28, 2014, 03:53:14 pm
The red cap merges with the orange sky, and the light outline right over the metal part (on the right) looks off. Everything other seems fine to me, except that huge amount of the article "the" I had to use.

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Re: Devotion

Reply #2 on: July 28, 2014, 05:23:32 pm
Wow i like a lot :)

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Re: Devotion

Reply #3 on: July 28, 2014, 05:41:13 pm
is it intended that the dog seems to be about to fall? the way it looks now the dog will certainly fall. if you want it to be more ambiguous or certain that the dog is going to make it i would move it up or decrease the distance between ledges. but if you want it to look like it certainly will fall, this is fine.

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Re: Devotion

Reply #4 on: July 28, 2014, 07:28:33 pm
I actually think the dog looks like its just launched, and we have no idea whether its athletic enough to make it, or if the little boy can even pull that big ol thang up. i like it, and i like the colours.

i would make the boy pop more, heres an edit wot i did



more contrast, and saturation places. i tried to add more contrast between the boys own colours, and more contrast between the boy and the background. you could add more for sure. I also got rid of the outlines on the boy, they didnt make sense to me.

apart from that you also have some banding on the rim lights (i think thats what agent00x was getting at)

<edit> oh and i got rid of some of the colours in the boy, the shoes, backpack and furthest arm are now the same colour

great pic!
« Last Edit: July 28, 2014, 07:31:56 pm by Probo »

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Re: Devotion

Reply #5 on: July 28, 2014, 07:44:28 pm
Probo Thanks a lot for your edits! I was actually thinking about popping boy a little bit with colors..guess I missed that in the end.???

Fizzick  The dog will make it...with tension though) Boy will grab her just in time and pull her up.
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Re: Devotion

Reply #6 on: July 28, 2014, 08:58:07 pm
Looks excellen! Is this from a game you're working on? Looks like like flashback or Out of This World?

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Re: Devotion

Reply #7 on: July 29, 2014, 06:50:08 pm
Looks excellen! Is this from a game you're working on? Looks like like flashback or Out of This World?
Thank you!
Yep) I will post from time to time new screens from it. ;)
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Re: Devotion

Reply #8 on: July 30, 2014, 02:34:33 pm
Feels man, feels, looks great.

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Re: Devotion

Reply #9 on: August 01, 2014, 04:07:05 pm
There is some banding going on where the edge of the balloon is. Here are a couple sample options for you if you'd like to avoid that.