AuthorTopic: GR#217 - Character - Sprite Process  (Read 6800 times)

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Re: First Pixelation(can I call it that?), [C+C]

Reply #20 on: September 30, 2014, 12:23:06 am
Nice work so far,

I notice you have a tangent with the sword handle and his leg that at a glance makes it look like the sword is sitting behind his leg.

Where do you see the tangent exactly? I'm not seeing what you are  :-[

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Re: First Pixelation(can I call it that?), [C+C]

Reply #21 on: September 30, 2014, 02:50:47 am
EDIT: my bad wrong area.
AlcopopStar is talking about the intersection between the character's right leg and the sword handle between the blade and handle I think.
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Re: First Pixelation(can I call it that?), [C+C]

Reply #22 on: September 30, 2014, 03:17:22 am
EDIT: my bad wrong area.
AlcopopStar is talking about the intersection between the character's right leg and the sword handle between the blade and handle I think.

Do you think it looks weird too??

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Re: First Pixelation(can I call it that?), [C+C]

Reply #23 on: September 30, 2014, 06:15:11 am
He did say at a quick glance. If you look closer it is fine, but I would recommend increasing the contrast between the two parts.

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Re: First Pixelation(can I call it that?), [C+C]

Reply #24 on: October 01, 2014, 05:12:16 am
I changed the pallet around a bit.

And tried to make the handle pop out a bit more by trimming a few things.
How is this??




EDIT 1:
I actually think it made it worse hahahaha

UPDATE:
Redrew the hair, and went back to the old colors.
Recolored the eyes (I should Probably be using the darker shade the contrast with the white is awful).
I wanted to reform the hair because I felt the last was really sloppy and didn't read as well.
(Thoughts?)





UPDATE:
DID A RECOLOR! I feel like he jumps out a little more here.





Update:
Some animated breathing (not really sure what else I should make move.. TRUST ME IT WAS A LOT WORSE XD)


« Last Edit: October 06, 2014, 06:02:57 am by Dyluckk »