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Portfolios / Re: [Up and Roarin' to go!] Complete overhaul!
« on: February 01, 2013, 12:45:09 am »
I'm ready to go!
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Pixel Art / Re: Centipede sprite
« on: January 24, 2013, 03:47:29 am »
I would recommend doing what tim did and putting the creature flat on the ground because it would only make further difficulties for the game. However, if you should decide to keep the head as it is, the current sprite seems to imply the creature is twisted and turned sideways due to the antennae so I recommend shifting one over.
Head is turned.
Looking forward.
Head is turned.
Looking forward.
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Fantasy isometric tileset
« on: January 24, 2013, 03:36:21 am »
Here is the final edited slime btw.
Overall, the colors on the character are a bit cold but the low saturation gives a nice feel. The perspective on the spider thing seems a bit off. The skeleton (I presume it is) seems to have a very off balanced stance compared to the others. Other than that, just continue cleaning up the lines
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2D & 3D / Re: Official OT-Creativity Thread 2
« on: January 23, 2013, 02:48:37 am »
Here are my English notes.
Full Size (It is pretty large and still crud quality, scanner is a broke): http://i.imgur.com/74kp0t7.jpg
The head could use some major work but I liked how the torso and stomach area turned out.
Full Size (It is pretty large and still crud quality, scanner is a broke): http://i.imgur.com/74kp0t7.jpg
The head could use some major work but I liked how the torso and stomach area turned out.
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General Discussion / Re: Game Developement
« on: January 20, 2013, 12:09:17 am »
Construct 2 is a good HTML5 engine.
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] BunnyGuy - Hai there.
« on: January 19, 2013, 04:53:16 am »
This is the image directly linked.
Overall, I would suggest a bit more contrast to improve readability, as well as reduce some necessary colors. Read up a bit on anatomy and try to not have such a stiff pose for the character.
(Also what is up with the BG? Just curious
).
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Pixel Art / Re: (WIP) RPG Mugshots and Battle characters
« on: January 08, 2013, 03:43:01 am »
The outlines are cleaned up nicely (though there are a few jaggies here and there) but what I've noticed is (at least from the mugshots) that you attempted to add texture on the clothing by simply scribbling on the shade, leaving lots of jagged lines and random pixels. This clashes with the smoother shading of the hair and skin. There is also a few other inconsistencies such as the hair of the guy on the very left being a different style than the rest and odd reflected light on the person with he bandana. Overall, they still seem a bit sketchy.
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Pixel Art / Re: This Slime is Annoying Me
« on: January 05, 2013, 04:12:34 am »
Well I can't since there would be a change background. Furthermore, the environment will be in a deeply shrubbed so there won't be much reflected light.
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Pixel Art / Re: This Slime is Annoying Me
« on: January 05, 2013, 02:12:19 am »
This is it cleaned up.
Err, I will attemped at saturating the mid tones.
Not sure if I did it correctly :\
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Pixel Art / Re: This Slime is Annoying Me
« on: January 04, 2013, 03:46:48 am »
Here is a quick sketch before I clean it up. I increased the contrast (thanks Charelieton!) and varies the hues larger. I tried to make the mouth shape more interesting and added the "stomach" from Cyangmou's edit (which is an awesome idea by the way). I implemented the messy/slimy bottom from Satsumes along with a border like bottom from Cyanmou's.
Should I clean it up?