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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !
« on: April 06, 2017, 04:34:28 am »
Your feet are still twitching on one frame. Fix that and you'll be much closer to fixing your issues.

I'd remove the blinking but that's just a small nitpick.

When Mystery says your lines are twitching and bouncing all over the place, Mystery is talking about for example, the belt and bottom back of the skull. The belt seems to be jumping up and down and the shape of the bottom back of the skull is changing shape throughout the animation. Also, the black pixels on the front of the bandana move on a frame.

thanks alot for the advice guys also i kinda wanted the animation to feel bouncy so I kept the belt  bounce but i made all the other changes you said. I also slowed it down a frame

                                               

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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !
« on: April 06, 2017, 02:39:11 am »
How does this one look, I tried reducing foot wiggle like you said and cleaned up the legs


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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !
« on: April 06, 2017, 01:49:18 am »
Edit: i tried overall cleaning up the animation especially the legs


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i was considering adding a clenching fist animation to it but I couldnt get it right...

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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !
« on: April 05, 2017, 08:10:03 pm »
bump. if anyone could help I would greatly appreciate it. ive seen the animations on this site and everyone seems to know a lot more than me

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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted !
« on: April 03, 2017, 11:18:50 am »
thanks yaoman it wasnt working from my google drive but through imgur it worked. much love

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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted !
« on: April 03, 2017, 04:22:10 am »
hmmmm

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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja Idle Critique Wanted !
« on: April 03, 2017, 04:10:38 am »
ignore this =)

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Pixel Art / Ninja Idle Critique Wanted please !
« on: April 03, 2017, 04:09:58 am »
I would really appreciate if anyone could critique this animation. I feel like i could make the animation a little more lively since this is supposed to go in a fighting game. thanks and feel free to change up the animation in anyway you want!



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