Hello artists !

I wanted to post some of my drawings for constructive (and destructive if you want) feedback.

Any comment is appreciated.

First Version:

Latest Version:


First Version:

Latest Version:


Skull+tongues:


Thanks!

Hi guys! Hope you're good.

Onward to my journey on making my game i created this skinny guy and i find trouble with his legs.



I'ts supposed to be a skinny dude, very mobile.

Thoughts? I'm feeling kinda akward with the phisique. Advices appreciated.

I posted this answer on an older post, but i think that my thread became too long, so i'm reposting it.Sorry if i am annoying, sincerely.

At the moment i'm working on various sprites but this is definitely the one that's giving me the most troubled one.

First model:



And some backstory:

There is a "machine", used on vulnerable individuals that can materialize your deepest fears,feelings and thoughts as one big entity and make it real. Using brain-scanner technology , along with a very advanced kind of ""printer""(More details in game). The purpose of this machine is to exploit certain individuals that have a great internal conflict, for example:

A raped little girl always gonna fear her rapist, so in this way, the machine can materialize the inner monster that this little girl is so afraid of, but through the eyes of a 10 years old, or so.

In this case i need to take a large concept,and start working from it, so i start with a person with no signs of being that kind of monster.Rapist tends to be regular people, normal to the eyes of everyone and i finish with a normal guy with an inocent look, but when he has the oportunity you can see the real monster that the little girl knows.That's my approach, and that's what i try to accomplish.

In this particular case,the backstory of this monster :

A guy, that is overwelmed by rage, blind by pressure, unable to control it.The machine took that powerful part of him, and turned him into this beast. So now he lurks the place punishing any kind of interruption, almost like a perfectionist that doesn't want to be bothered.A complete workaholic.Of course stealth this time doesn't work with plain sight, but with smell, and noise. The player has to dismember the beast with the environment because you can't get close to him (You know, Death and stuff.).

I'm not aiming to a hack and slash, neither a beat em up, i just want to give every boss its own world, so it is the case for my fellow amigo, that has brought me so many issues lately.

Sorry for the long writting.

After my first sprite i started to work towards this guy and made like 5-6 different models



Then i tried giving him another pose to focus on different parts and details(Like height and torso)



And finally tried to give him some shades (i think the last one was better)



Thanks for reading.

Well, i started with this guy:



and i was trying to change some colours and trying to give him "something" else... The thing is that i ran out of ideas for this dude.

Well, i made him this:



It's not the big deal,but i changed some colors here and there to fit the colour palette of all my mobs

Looking for opinions and second thoughts please!

Need help with fold shading please,any advice is completely appreciated(English is not my native language).

Initially, I tried to do a big guy that as supposed to resemble anger/hate, but i ended up making this Horn dude.Need help with his skirt shade, and i'm completely aware that my work on shadows overall is absolutely noob-ish. Need advice.