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Pixel Art / Re: My first pixel art :)
« on: August 04, 2017, 01:14:19 am »

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Pixel Art / Re: My first pixel art :)
« on: May 10, 2017, 02:13:21 am »
I did this today ^^

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Pixel Art / Re: My first pixel art :)
« on: May 09, 2017, 02:36:14 am »
I tried a new style of pixel art
http://yoshift.deviantart.com/art/Wanderer-679551650?ga_submit_new=10%3A1494286664

That's pretty nice, but I reccomend you continue embedding images. Putting a clickthrough like that isn't exactly ideal for ease of use!
As for crits, I'd say it kinda works but there's a lot of empty/wasted space and weird inconsistency on this picture. for example, why's the stop sign there without a proper road? Why'd you miss an opportunity to plonk in a proper wasteland-y ruined highway on top of that muddy path, replete with cracks and divots and worn paint? And why is there no continuation of that path over the hills leading towards the city?

Internal consistency is very important! While deliberately ignoring it can be a great way to imbue a work with a kind of ethereal mystic vibe, you mostly want to avoid it or risk confusing the person looking at the piece!

Thanks you ! You really help me ;)

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Pixel Art / Re: My first pixel art :)
« on: May 08, 2017, 11:39:12 pm »

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Pixel Art / Re: My first pixel art :)
« on: April 22, 2017, 03:44:33 pm »


I made more details. :)

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Pixel Art / Re: My first pixel art :)
« on: April 20, 2017, 06:49:48 pm »
Close, but still feels simple and unfocused. These are great scenes, but the lack of detailwork doesn't hold the eye past that first impression.

Try to push out of your minimalist comfort zone!
Thanks you for the answer,
Can you give a good exemple please :)

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Pixel Art / Re: My first pixel art :)
« on: April 20, 2017, 01:53:30 pm »
I do another one


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Pixel Art / Re: My first pixel art :)
« on: April 20, 2017, 11:18:17 am »
VERY nice colors. I'd try and work with more complicated environments, though. Dense city clusters, cave networks overflowing with strange plants, etc.

I'd also try to play more with solo-focus stuff. Humans, animals, etc. More definition! That last one is EXCELLENT work, but variation is key.

Thanks you :) I will try with a sci-fi theme

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Pixel Art / My first pixel art :)
« on: April 20, 2017, 02:17:14 am »







Sorry for the size

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