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Pixel Art / Re: [C&C] Android
« on: April 26, 2017, 02:10:02 pm »
Did some progress:

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Pixel Art / [C&C] Android
« on: April 25, 2017, 09:05:59 pm »
Thing I made:

Looking for tips how to improove.

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Cyberpunkish character
« on: March 01, 2017, 10:05:03 pm »
Thx for support and tips. I defenitly need to train my skills in shading. Colour pallete helped a lot but I didn't go with everything like in Swifty edit. I wanted to keep his skin pale and also I felt like you made his face bit to small by changing left side of his jaw so much. I changed it but I did it gentle I think. I fixed the scarf basing on what you made. I copied jacket and tried to make something with it but I couldn't make it it look any better :P For now I'll stick with ur version if you don't mind.


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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Cyberpunkish character
« on: February 27, 2017, 09:38:12 am »
Could you give me some tips about what excatly I messed up here?

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Cyberpunkish character
« on: February 26, 2017, 11:29:19 pm »
Made some progress. Edited nose and made it bigger. Changed face shape in few places. Moved ear to the left a little bit. Added some detail to glasses but I'm not sure how to make them look more detached from the face if that's not enough. Changed mouth coz i don't feel it was fitting the rest of the character. Moved the jacket highter up coz I felt like his neck way looking way too long. Also made some more minor changes.

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Pixel Art / [C+C] Cyberpunkish character
« on: February 26, 2017, 12:17:59 pm »
I've made that character and since it's probably my first time creating big face like that I feel it looks really unrealistic and messy. Hoping for some critique and tips.

Little progress:

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Mechanic
« on: February 21, 2017, 09:08:56 pm »
Well it's up to you with colours but maybe you could change lighting a little bit in these 2 spots:

As it is right now handle seems detached from the rest.

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Mechanic
« on: February 21, 2017, 04:43:12 pm »
I've made a little edit maybe you'll like it:

Changed up wrench mostly coz it's lighting seemed strange for me. Epecially on middle. I brighten up the brightest wrench colour to make it look more metalic. I also tried to make lighting more fluent. Changed up boots a little bit but im not sure if it's a good change :P

Also I think you could make her hands overlap the wrench more. I didn't want to edit them coz I suck at drawing hands and didn't want to mess it up.

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Boombox
« on: February 21, 2017, 04:19:36 pm »
Ok thx. So I guess I should change the right side go with the blue line?

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Pixel Art / [C+C] Boombox
« on: February 20, 2017, 11:15:46 pm »
Boombox I've been working on latelty. It took me some time and tbh I'm pretty pround of it but I'm sure It got a lot of flaws and can be much better.

Looking foward to critique and tips.

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