Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Beetleking22 on May 16, 2017, 03:41:52 pm
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Hello guys. I started to animate again but I tend to make a lot of erros because Im still pretty noob when it comes animation. I would love to hear some criticism. The animation supposed to be faster but when I saved it as Gif it turned to very slow.
(http://i67.tinypic.com/28wjrx5.jpg)
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I got some help from Tig forum. It seems I had some problem with position. The the small touch like position improves a lot.
Old :
(http://i67.tinypic.com/28wjrx5.jpg)
New :
(http://i66.tinypic.com/286s9yq.gif)
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Oh yeah, big improvement! I'd have Never noticed!
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I think there is 1 frame too much of his wings rising, it should be an inbetween instead. I tried to make this edit myself to see if it worked but wings are hard, so please forgive me.
Other than that I think that by changing the frame rate of some frames could make the wing claps a lot more heavier. Probably doesn't fit such a small bird, but if it was a bigger bird it would definitely improve it.
edit:
(http://i.imgur.com/HIuNvHb.gif)
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I think there is 1 frame too much of his wings rising, it should be an inbetween instead. I tried to make this edit myself to see if it worked but wings are hard, so please forgive me.
Yeah I notice that.
No problem! Better? Or are the last wing too low?
(http://i64.tinypic.com/2qsqseb.gif)
Other than that I think that by changing the frame rate of some frames could make the wing claps a lot more heavier. Probably doesn't fit such a small bird, but if it was a bigger bird it would definitely improve it.
edit:
I have done that in Original version but I cannot show it because when I save it it looks slow..