Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: StelloHexis on April 06, 2017, 11:20:11 pm

Title: [WIP] Villain
Post by: StelloHexis on April 06, 2017, 11:20:11 pm

(http://i.imgur.com/VXErPrU.png)
Hello friends! I'm trying to make a "final boss" type of character. How can I improve this sprite?

Title: Re: [WIP] Villain
Post by: eishiya on April 06, 2017, 11:37:02 pm

There's a lot of wind blowing their hair, but the clothing isn't affected by that same wind at all. Give it some dramatic billowing!

Is there a story behind this character? At a glance, the colours and posing don't read as "villain" or "boss" to me.

Title: Re: [WIP] Villain
Post by: MysteryMeat on April 06, 2017, 11:39:50 pm

I'd give them an intimidating mask, like what samurai used to wear. The face and color scheme are both a bit underwhelming, has more of a tubby c leric vibe to me than anything else!

Title: Re: [WIP] Villain
Post by: StelloHexis on April 07, 2017, 02:59:15 am

(http://i.imgur.com/KlbFZRI.png)

Title: Re: [WIP] Villain
Post by: MysteryMeat on April 07, 2017, 03:16:15 am

Tops work, looks very villainy now. Kinda puts me in mind of that one guy from berzerk!