Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: DieMango on February 09, 2017, 06:05:27 pm

Title: Explosion needs help!
Post by: DieMango on February 09, 2017, 06:05:27 pm

Image:
imgur.com/a/R6b2V (http://imgur.com/a/R6b2V)

Just started tp practice Animating (with the help of these cool tutorials :https://www.patreon.com/saint11/posts?tag=tutorial (https://www.patreon.com/saint11/posts?tag=tutorial))

But i am really not too happy abou what i have right now...or with other words:,
, i have no clue of how a good explosion shoud look like''

Edit: New Animation...how is this one?
(http://i.imgur.com/OKJeOfp.gif)

Maybe ths is great...but i doubt it...something seems off with the Yellow-explosion...to big spikes? Or did i fuck up the smoke?...really not sure...

Title: Re: Explosion needs help!
Post by: Sersch on February 12, 2017, 04:24:44 pm

It already looks quite good, i think it could look better if you see some more yellow/red flames, right now the duration for that part is rather short.

Title: Re: Explosion needs help!
Post by: DieMango on February 13, 2017, 10:37:56 am

Quote from: Sersch on February 12, 2017, 04:24:44 pm

It already looks quite good, i think it could look better if you see some more yellow/red flames, right now the duration for that part is rather short.

But the flames go out the isntant smokes appears...i try to make the flame-frames longer.

Title: Re: Explosion needs Critic (repost from the normal forum)
Post by: MysteryMeat on February 14, 2017, 08:27:38 pm

Try tweaking it so the spikes come out from the "seams" between the smoke puffs?