Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: ElChuchis on January 06, 2017, 01:01:46 pm
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I am making a Cockatrice, but i am not happy with it... Need some help to polish the shadows and the wings! Thanks you all! :)
(http://www16.picfront.org/picture/wMRsdUUwA/thb/CockatriceHELP.png)
http://www.picfront.org/d/9uEa
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Hey man,
First of all, looks good, i can tell it's a cockatrice.
What I would do first is tone down a bit with the AA and use way less colors, at the moment it looks pretty blurry.
Regarding the wings, you could make them go up a bit higher and maybe let the front wing go more over the body.
Hope this helps!
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Hey man,
First of all, looks good, i can tell it's a cockatrice.
What I would do first is tone down a bit with the AA and use way less colors, at the moment it looks pretty blurry.
Regarding the wings, you could make them go up a bit higher and maybe let the front wing go more over the body.
Hope this helps!
Thanks you! I will learn some AA tips, I never used it before and I search on internet and it seems good! Ty! I will update the pic when I get the result!
About the wings, in my opinion are chicken wings and I think chicken wings are close of the body!
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I tried to add some AA, not sure if is well aplicated ???
(http://www16.picfront.org/picture/rME5a62B1/thb/CockatriceHELP2.png)
http://www.picfront.org/d/9uEk
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FINISHED!
(http://i.imgur.com/wlGSV4Z.gif) (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/commercial-photography/)
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It is not bad but it looks very flat, maybe you should change the shading so that it would help define the shapes and give volume, particularly in the wings.